‘her first thrashing’
was originally written as ‘in the gymnasium’, but for a reason I’ll go into in next, I decided this didn’t have enough impact; furthermore, it didn’t give an instant clue as to what the story was about
. I’ll also credit any reader with the suggestion at the head of the story (see ‘Mother’s Girl 2’).
. . But then the full weight of the situation I am in struck my head
‘her first thrashing’
was originally written as ‘in the gymnasium’, but for a reason I’ll go into in next, I decided this didn’t have enough impact; furthermore, it didn’t give an instant clue as to what the story was about
. I’ll also credit any reader with the suggestion at the head of the story (see ‘Mother’s Girl 2’).
. . But then the full weight of the situation I am in struck my head
‘her first thrashing’
was originally written as ‘in the gymnasium’, but for a reason I’ll go into in next, I decided this didn’t have enough impact; furthermore, it didn’t give an instant clue as to what the story was about
. I’ll also credit any reader with the suggestion at the head of the story (see ‘Mother’s Girl 2’).
. . But then the full weight of the situation I am in struck my head
Alia Shawkat nude – Paint It Black (2017)